goodbest - 2007/12/7 23:11:00
看过雪飘第九话的Ana翻译了，觉得很有感觉，于是斗胆把整首歌翻译给补完了。
前半部分是按照雪飘的翻译，后半部分带括号的是自己瞎翻的 ，对应ana 8分钟的版本
雪飘24话也是这个翻译的。
[ti:Ana]
[ar:Lia]
[al:clannad ost cd3]
[by:小白eva / 小猫gb]
[00:02.99]Ana
[00:07.60]
[00:11.51]The place changes and goes. Like a wind, like clouds.
时空荏苒 如风似云
[00:22.15]Like the traces of the heart, no halt at the places.
宛如心迹 毫不停息
[00:36.06]
[00:37.07]The place is so far away, be far apart.
彼方之远 支离破碎
[00:47.42]people's hand does not reach.so merely has (the) worship.
无法触及 唯能礼敬
[01:00.39]
[01:01.86]The place is a lofty lord. can't meet nobody put on.
高高在上 君临万物
[01:12.99]We will lose the place.so lofty which changes.
转瞬即逝 变幻莫测
[01:25.82]
[01:26.89]Not all were desired. However, we're never sad.
绝非遂心 从不气馁
[01:38.30]still, there is still the place.far away. far away.
（约定之地 其路漫漫）
[01:52.40]
[01:52.73]
[01:53.22](The wind) blows through the place. an endless, with all.
（秋风萧瑟 永不止息）
[02:03.69]Like the ripple float on the water. It blows at as it goes.
（好似涟漪 来之又去）
[02:16.84]
[02:17.68]the place is No make at all. Nothing is shown.
（不毛之地 万物沉寂）
[02:29.45]Like the sand clasped by hand. It falls vainly.
（仿佛流沙 徒然消逝）
[02:42.18]
[02:44.40]The place is (a) profound lord,and wear the vain faint light.
（深邃之地 灯火阑珊）
[02:54.58]But we will find it in the place.The hut at which it stands still.
（蓦然回首 陋室已觅）
[03:07.35]
[03:08.70]if not cencerned with all, It will maintain that No dye.
（倘若无爱 终将毫无生机）
[03:20.26]therefore there is still the hut.It's lonly, solitary.
（空留陋室 孤独凄凄）
[03:32.97]
[03:33.24]
[03:34.68]no halt at the wind.it soars to the sky.
（风儿不止 拥向蓝天）
[03:45.71]Like the verdure (which) meets with sunrise, It grows up as reborn.
（沐浴阳光 大地复苏）
[03:59.11]
[04:00.39]The hut has held new one.that's different from all.
（小屋迎客 迥然不同）
[04:11.04]like the sand castle of the children,but realized with the mind.
（虽是陋室 唯吾德馨）（形若沙雕 神若宫殿）
[04:23.89]
[04:25.54]The person is a vain statue.wear taciturnity calm.
（客如石雕 天性静默）
[04:36.47]still,We will know a huge flow.It is stopped by nobody.
（暗藏洪流 无人能息）
[04:47.31]
[04:47.62]soon, the wind wears the snow cloud. will be dyed to snow-white.
（雪舞轻盈 银装素裹）
[04:59.16]Summer gr*** will incline,No sunlight,feebly shade.
（绿色消散 暖日匿迹）
[05:20.92]
[05:32.07]
[05:42.29]The place buried in deep snow.like the collapsing castle.
（厚厚白雪 吞噬大地）
[05:52.61]like the head of the shade,figure will be thrown away.
（就像亡灵 躯体不再）
[06:06.48]
[06:07.15]The hut buried in deep snow.It sinks in to the flood.
（没过陋室 融入雪流）
[06:18.64]and the "not dyeing" is dyed out,and waits for a oppose one.
（所谓不变 终将改变 变成对立）
[06:30.98]
[06:32.16]Even if all are healed, be gonna no return.
（就算复原 也别再回首）
[06:43.70]there is still the place.far way. far away.
（但此地仍存 其路漫漫）
[06:57.50]
[06:57.85]
[06:58.79]The place changes and goes. Like a wind, like clouds.
时空荏苒 如风似云
[07:08.94]Like the traces of the heart, no halt at the places.
宛如心迹 毫不停息
[07:22.60]
[07:25.62]The place is a lofty lord. can't meet nobody put on.
高高在上 君临万物
[07:36.01]still,there is still the place. far away. far away.
（此地永在 其路修远 其路漫漫）
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我的翻译肯定还需要不少改进，向各位请教了
水羊 - 2007/12/8 1:03:00
自己翻的!?
嗯………英文好强喔~~~~~~(带有羡慕的味道)
好!!我看看……
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句子太深奥了!!
头尾接不起来了!!
请问这是诗集吗??
hepi9 - 2007/12/8 2:33:00
偶想不必刻意用诗歌的表现手发波?这样子的话就是首诗歌了~感觉用渲染后的白文好点~
dreamz - 2007/12/8 7:34:00
我也觉得用白话可能会更好,刻意用诗的形式感觉有点牵强,顺其自然比较好^^
hisuiIBMPower4 - 2007/12/8 7:40:00
这歌词很鬼异啊，等下网上找了原文再说
goodbest - 2007/12/11 18:22:00
为什么没人提意见呢？
不过确实感觉这首歌歌词思想有点跳跃。
一些比喻倒是用的挺好